🔍 What You’ll Get
When you upload your deck, you’ll receive structured, actionable feedback in three parts:
Part A — Scorecard
Ratings (0–5) on completeness, clarity, brevity, cohesion, and readability.
Overall verdict in plain language: Does this deck get read?
Part B — Action Plan
Top 5 fixes to sharpen your deck immediately.
A 10–12 slide map with intent + word count targets.
A 48-hour checklist so you know exactly what to revise next.
Part C — Rewrites & Refinements
Example logline rewrite (original vs improved).
Reworked Tone, World, and Why Now sections.
Trimmed Characters slide guidance.
Comps analysis: up to 3, with reasons why they work.
Red flags and fixes (like business vs creative deck, overwriting, comps sprawl).
Style Linter: quick hits on copy flow (long sentences, em dashes, word counts).
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The Reviewer isn’t a generic AI. It’s a custom tool trained on my voice and fifteen years of pitch deck experience. It combines speed with precision: you get blunt, surgical notes in the same format I’ve used for projects at Netflix, HBO, PBS, and indie festivals.
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Filmmakers and writers testing early drafts.
Creators submitting to labs, grants, or fellowships.
Producers who need a second set of eyes before sending their deck out.
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Full deck redesign or visual overhaul.
Unlimited revisions.
Live consultation (that’s the Power Hour).